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A Contracting Reflection by ~BloodY-CatalysiS:iconBloodY-CatalysiS:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




So High

Untouchable Limits

Call Me


Bloody Catalysises

Deep Inside

Turn My Tears

into Ice


Father of Pains

Let Me Understand!


Struggling in Silence

Deep Flow of Conscience

I Seek Answers

in Realms of Non-Existence


Finally

Asking Myself

Why I Am Nothing

and Yet

So Intensely


I Feel
©2004-2009 ~BloodY-CatalysiS
:iconbloody-catalysis:

Author's Comments

Just got bored but at the same time slightly inspired... and suddenly this little brat was born; between too deep reality and mere poetical fiction, I'd say. Nothing special, but whatever.

Thanks to the beautiful ~chesirecattie for the preview image.

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~DaSilvabuddah May 5, 2004, 1:42:39 PM
hmm, very nice

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Who Stole My Cancer Stick?!?
:iconmagicaldeviantjew64:
~MagicalDeviantJew64 May 5, 2004, 5:01:57 PM
Your style makes me tingle, as always. Despite your boredom, you certainly prove yourself worthy of praise. Simplistic, articulate, emotional, and moving. Not your best, but each line grips me. Wonderful.

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I' mi son un' che, quando Amor mi spira, noto, e a quel modo ch'e' ditta dentro, vo significando.
:iconbloody-catalysis:
~BloodY-CatalysiS May 6, 2004, 5:48:59 AM
Thank you, girl.

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Principiante.
:iconbloody-catalysis:
~BloodY-CatalysiS May 6, 2004, 5:52:53 AM
Every time I write something, I always long to receive comment on it from both you and aixerona... I wonder if this is because your comments truly prove that you read and critic my work, or only because your compliments give my over-grown ego such a relief...

Anyway, as always, I am glad you liked it. However, are you sure you haven't any suggestions for a possible improvement? I'd love to receive advice from the likes of you... and sometimes I truly don't know towards which direction proceed.

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Principiante.
:icondasilvabuddah:
~DaSilvabuddah May 6, 2004, 12:10:34 PM
You're welcome

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Who Stole My Cancer Stick?!?
:iconmagicaldeviantjew64:
~MagicalDeviantJew64 May 6, 2004, 3:33:25 PM
I honestly lack suggestions [aided by lack of sleep]. An inner struggle seems to be taking place within each line. Striving for the unattainable while withdrawing from the process.

I am always one for verbosity [hence my ridiculous writing style], but yours is one to which I am not accustomed. I cannot truly help you improve a style I do not completely understand, though I can find not true flaws in the work itself.

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I' mi son un' che, quando Amor mi spira, noto, e a quel modo ch'e' ditta dentro, vo significando.
:iconaixerona:
~aixerona May 9, 2004, 7:09:04 AM
I feel your pain... this is intense and intensly expressive. so much to be said in so little words...

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  • too much alcohol is good for the soul
  • (i believe in commenting back)
    • :iconbloody-catalysis:
    ~BloodY-CatalysiS May 9, 2004, 7:13:38 AM
    You don't have to say anything, my lady... I'm just happy knowing that you still read my works. And that you still like them.

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    Principiante.
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    ~Mind-of-wings May 23, 2004, 7:14:19 AM
    you have the most beautiful style. it flows so well. And the picture is fantastic (I know you didn't take it) So expressive. :glomp:

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    I try to take care of myself…ok I’m drinking and smoking, but look I’m also eating a cough sweet
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